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Joined: 2/16/2008
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Ok, I see there's no post on here, But I'll make one!
CHAPTER ONE:
I was walking across the parking lot of an amusement park in Flordia. Though I was just there on vacation, and I wanted to go to Disney Land so I could see someone cool perform. We were here though. This was a cool park and everything, But I know where I wanted to be. Soon I would be right where I wanted to though. Soon.
My Mom saw the sad look on my face as I walked across the sement that covered the park, Then My Mom asked me, "Why don't we go see this Joey Page guy?" Then I jumped up, and siad, "Joey Page! I Love him!" My Mom gave me a strange look, and siad, "I thought you didn't know who he was?" My mind got filled with so many thoughts. Joey was my secret obbsession for so long. But he wasn't that famouse, and you didn't see him in many places. Then I said to her, "The truth is, I'm a big fan, it's just, i don't know. He's just not that big. so, I just, I don't know." I myself was confused by what I said, and the thoughts running through my mind. My Mom then said, well he's performing here today." My heart filled with joy when she said that. From the first look of this cute, great guy my heart filled with joy, and started to melt. I yelled, "Yes!" My Mom smiled at me finally getting in to something. This is what I had been living for. I would see my true love in the distance. My Mom said, "Oh, and according to the parks pamplet, he will be doing an meet, and greet after the show. At that moment I hugged my mother. This was going to be the Best day of my life. But something would go wrong. dun, dun, dun!
We had two hours till the concert.
September, 20th, 2009-Joey Page.
That day Needs to come.
Now.
Dallas Texas
Loves
Joey Page
Myspace.com/joeypagedallasfans
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Ok, I see No one responded, But that wont stop me!
I'll make this FF Better!
CHAPTER TWO:
It was so close to the best moment of my life. I asked my Mom, "Can I go to the Bathroom?" My mom nodded her head as I rushed off. As soon as I got in a headed for the mirror. I searched through my messy purse for my make-up. I put the powder on. I wasn't going to the bathroom, I was getting ready for only the most important hour of my Life! I started to brush my hair as I looked in the mirror. My hair was a mess form being on all the crazy rides I randomly went on when I truly didn't want to. My hair was filled with dirt from it. I thought it was nasty. My hair couln't look like this around Joey, It was already hidiouse form what I was convenced. It was brown, and ringlet curly. People had told me it would look cleaner, and shineier if it was Black, but as far as my Mom was concerned, Black was "Gothic" no matter how good it looked. Speaking of "The Devil" she (My Mom) walked in. "What's taking you so long?" she askled as she peared through the door. "I'm getting...........clean." I said. She told me, "Hurry up!" and just stood there, wanting me to not care about how I looked. I finally shoved my make-up, and brush in my bag as she dragged me out.
I relized how unprepared for this, I quickly told my Mom, "I need a poster for this! Other fans are probabay other fans here who have them." I could hear my Mom mummble, "Yea, other fans knew before the last minute." I could tell she was angry, but still I yelled at her, "I heard that! You know, I would know alot more if you would of got me a computer!" She rolled her eyes. She thought I was a "Spoiled Brat" She thought I wanted, "Everything" . I kept on as I could see it in her, eyes, she was getting even more mad, I yelled, "And, No, I don't want everything! Is that what you think! I need this stuff, and I'm a kid!" She grabbed my hand and pulled me aside, she yelled, "What! You are a Brat! We are leaving Now!" I pulled away as I ran into the bathroom.
To be continued....................................................
In the next Chapter................
September, 20th, 2009-Joey Page.
That day Needs to come.
Now.
Dallas Texas
Loves
Joey Page
Myspace.com/joeypagedallasfans
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OK, so nobody's reading this......................I'll still go on with it!
CHAPTER 3:
"This can't be happening!" But it was. I jerked away in frustation as I yelled, "No!" She still pulled me out, "You are embarassing me" she whispered to me as she dragged me out.
I didn't 'hate' my Mom, but I didn't like her. She's not really my Mom, she's my Step Mom. She didn't care what My opinion was. My actual Dad......well, I really don't like to talk about it, but I'll tell you anyway. My Dad............is dead.
He was my Best Freind.
I used to be a Tomboy, but when My step mom came she hated that aspect, but she delt with it.
From the start I wasn't a big fan at all of her. Each day she would give me an evil look. I was suprised how much nicer she turned out to be, but still. She wanted me to be girly, but wouldn't by me anything but make-up. She wanted me to be a Model, when I wanted to be a Full-on-Rock-Star. Like Paramore, but instead of a less girly vibe.
Even though "my eveil step mother" wanted me to be a girly-girl, and I wouldn't stand a chance in that world. I still tryed. I tryed to please her with every move for a year, but just a month ago, I couldn't take it anymore. I fought back.
We went on with our lifes though. She let me be a little less girly by taking me here, that was her, "Apology" for the way she had treated me. Well, doesn't she see herself now?
All that led to this moment.
As she pulled me out of the Bathroom. I saw a Face, and the most Amazing hair, and Eyes. The most Amazing Guy.
PLEASE COMMENT IF YOU ARE READING!
THANK YOU!
September, 20th, 2009-Joey Page.
That day Needs to come.
Now.
Dallas Texas
Loves
Joey Page
Myspace.com/joeypagedallasfans
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Joined: 6/29/2008
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i think that thi'd be a really great story if u fixed ur sentence structure.
just a little friendly critism......dont start every sentence w/ "I"
and try to use figurative language. but other than that, keep writing!
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OH! Sorry I haven't posted in a long time, no one was reading!
And, thanks for the tips, I've improved my writeing since then...maybe?
lol,
here's the next chapter!
Chapter Four
Today, I was at the park that I'd perform at, walking across to open street when I saw a pair of eyes cut through mine they were shining as bright as a silver star in the sky. My Face lit up as a smiled lit up on my face.
Her hair was a bit messed up, but stil Beautufl, I saw a lady dragging her away, the girls eyes were watering up,tearing up with pain, I could see it.
As I walked toward her, I could hear the scream she let out, "No! Mom, it's-" What looked to be her Mother have her a glare with the corner of the eye as her shawodw faded away into a distance.
Would I ever see her, this Pretty girl I fell for in a split second?
Did I fall for her?
I Don't just want this, I need this.
How?
COMMENTS ARE LOVED!
SO IS JOEY!
September, 20th, 2009-Joey Page.
That day Needs to come.
Now.
Dallas Texas
Loves
Joey Page
Myspace.com/joeypagedallasfans
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